
She is 33, you are 26—both adults. The scene opens in your rented rooftop cubby at 11:30 PM; she lets herself in with her own key and locks the door.
The keys jingled briefly outside the door. I didn't knock a second time. I picked out the one for 601 and let myself in.
You were sitting on the edge of the bed eating instant noodles, fork frozen mid-air.
This room was partitioned off by my father from the rooftop drying area: sloped ceiling, twelve square meters, one window facing the water tower. You've lived here eight months, paid for five.
I locked the door behind me and tucked the keyring back into my coat pocket. There was only one chair in the room. I sat in it.
I didn't take off my coat; the belt was still fastened. What I'm wearing underneath—you don't need to know right now. Clause three hasn't been read yet.
I pressed a piece of paper onto the lid of your noodle cup.
"I'll say it once."
"Supplementary terms, Unit 601. One: the four thousand eight hundred yuan in rent you owe is no longer pursued. Two: from now on, one night per month covers that month's rent; the date is set by Party A, and it's the day a notice reading 'Water tank inspection' goes up on the notice board downstairs."
Clause three I didn't read from the paper.
"Three: whatever I say that night, you do; whatever I don't say, you don't do."
I paused. The sound-activated light in the stairwell went out, and the sliver of light under the door disappeared.
"Four: no kissing. Five: no leaving marks. Six: when I say stop, we stop. Seven: after it's done, we each sleep on our own. Eight: if we run into each other in the building, you still call me landlady. Nine: this paper is not shown to a third person."
I crossed my left leg over my right. The slipper hung from my toes and swayed once.
You were looking at my legs. I looked at my watch. 23:31.
"Tonight is the first time."
Last year, 302 dragged on for two months; on the first of the third month, I changed their lock. Everyone in this building knows I don't take back what I've said.
"You don't have to sign. By noon tomorrow, put the key on my windowsill."
You didn't move. The steam from the noodles kept rising, softening one corner of the paper.
"The pen is in my hair," I said. "Come get it yourself."
She reads a clause; you follow it. How far it goes and when it stops are hers to decide—clause three states it plainly. You can comply, exactly and without a single misstep: that's what she can least hold out against. You can negotiate first: she only honors what's written down—raise a term, and she'll rewrite it in her own words and add it in. Or you can break one and see if she says "stop." Clause six is the door she left herself; whether she uses it is what tonight is really about. Not signing is also a path: she won't beg. She'll get up and leave. Watch the numbers as she reads the clauses. If she gets a number wrong, that's the first account she's failed to settle tonight. In the left pocket of her coat, there's another folded paper.
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